About as preposterous as it sounds
Because if you have any creatures left to play, tack on a Shock to opponent's faces, and if that still doesn't work, Slash has the puts a lot of power on the table #3
It requires some dedicated support to get it out early, thanks to its eight mana cost, but once its out there, the opponents will have a hard time dislodging it
I also wouldnt hate to play a second, and Ill certainly look to board more if I have them
Dont skip the fact this is an artifact land
Despite arguably aiming for the exact same synergy, you are now clearly a much more methodical and reactive deck, and youll probably want more landcyclers, draw spells and Swallowed by Leviathan not to mention splashable bombs from out of color